Personnel Traits
Name: Carmelblaze
Alias: Carmel, Caramel, Blaze, Char, Mel
Age: 37 moons
Gender: Tom
Personality: he doesnt give up easily and is very stubborn. He isnt all that intelligant and will sometimes act before thinking. He is brave though, or is it stupidity? He can at times be funny but since this strange sickness, he's been quite serious.
History: born a clan cat, his life was hard. His mother died giving birth and deep down, Carmel's father blamed him. Not Carmel's siblings, just Carmel. When he and his siblings were five moons old, Applekit, Carmel's older brother, was snatched up by a hawk. In battle as apprentices, Carmel's older sister, Speedpaw, was killed by Icepaw, a RiverClan apprentice, amd Carmelblaze as forever loathed her, even though she is now a medicine cat. Speedpaw was always nice and sympathetic to Carmel. When Carmel was twelve moons old, almost a warrior, another tragic thing happened. His father was killed. He died as he lived, looking for revenge, full of bloodlust. Now, the only survivor of Carmel's family are him, and his older brother Hailfall. And Hailfall isnt all that nice.
Physical Traits
Breed of Cat: american shorthair
Height: 3'4"
Weight: 5.7 pounds
Color of Eyes: blue
Appearance: caramel-colored coat with short sleek fur and lighter stripes. His eyes are light blue and his markings are: on his muzzle, tail tip, ears, his left front paw and back right paw, and random elsewhere. (Possible picture soon)
Physical/Performance-wise Strengths: he's fast and small
Physical/Performance-wise Weakness: because of his small size, he is sometimes an easy target and not that strong
Mental Traits
Interests: hunting and showing off
Dislikes: Iceshard, Dark Forest cats, his father
Fears: his father, death, insanity
Mental Strengths: he is 100% sane and he feels the sprit of his mother around him sometimes, lifting his spirits and encouraging him.
Mental Weaknesses: Because of his past, he is often haunted by nightmares, usually of his father coming back or his mother's death. Sometime's they are so vivid and severe, that he is only half-listening to what's happening most of the time. When it comes to battle, a new fear gets his attention.
Social Status
Tribe/Clan: SkyClan
Rank: Warrior
Family:
Brothers - Hailfall (Alive), Applekit (Hunts in StarClan)
Sister - Speedpaw (Hunts in StarClan)
Mother - Sweetlily (Hunts in StarClan)
Father - Sharpthorn (Wanders in The Dark Forest)
Mate: not yet
Kits: not yet
Extra: His named is spelled "Carmel" instead of "Caramel" because it is pronounced "Carmel."
He swears Iceshard's parcially insane.
RP Sample:
I panicked. Who to choose? My leader? Or my sister. My sister. I ran over to her, thinking I could make it on time, when another apprentice darted into my path. Jaypaw. Icepaw's brother from ShadowClan. I push him out of the way and dart passed him, only to be dragged back down again. He digs his claws into my back and I can only watch as Icepaw pounces on Sweetpaw and starts pummeling her belly. Then Sweetpaw wiggles out and jumps on top of Icepaw and is about land a hard blow when I suddenly feel the weight on me lighten and Jaypaw runs to rescue his sister. They all start fighting and thrashing out at each other. It's not a fair fight. As I get up to help Sweetpaw, Icepaw and Jaypaw step back staring in horror, as Sweetpaw's eyes rolled into the back of her head, and she collapsed on the ground, bleeding from a wound in her throat. I rush over to her and Icepaw and Jaypaw dont attack. "C-Carmelpaw..." Sweetpaw rasped. "St-stay strong... For m-me.... For y-y-you... You m-must bec-come a w-w-war..." her voice trailed off.
"No no no no." I meowed. "Stay with me!"
"Become a w-warrior.... For the... For the both of u-us... I l-love y-you..." her eyes glazed over and she stopped moving.
"No. No. No no no!" I wailed. "Sweetpaw! Dont-dont leave me! Sweetpaw!!"
"I-I'm s-sorry. I-I-I didn't mean to k-kill her." Icepaw wimpered.
"Well you did!" I screeched. "And I will never, EVER forgive you." then I ran off.
Name: Carmelblaze
Alias: Carmel, Caramel, Blaze, Char, Mel
Age: 37 moons
Gender: Tom
Personality: he doesnt give up easily and is very stubborn. He isnt all that intelligant and will sometimes act before thinking. He is brave though, or is it stupidity? He can at times be funny but since this strange sickness, he's been quite serious.
History: born a clan cat, his life was hard. His mother died giving birth and deep down, Carmel's father blamed him. Not Carmel's siblings, just Carmel. When he and his siblings were five moons old, Applekit, Carmel's older brother, was snatched up by a hawk. In battle as apprentices, Carmel's older sister, Speedpaw, was killed by Icepaw, a RiverClan apprentice, amd Carmelblaze as forever loathed her, even though she is now a medicine cat. Speedpaw was always nice and sympathetic to Carmel. When Carmel was twelve moons old, almost a warrior, another tragic thing happened. His father was killed. He died as he lived, looking for revenge, full of bloodlust. Now, the only survivor of Carmel's family are him, and his older brother Hailfall. And Hailfall isnt all that nice.
Physical Traits
Breed of Cat: american shorthair
Height: 3'4"
Weight: 5.7 pounds
Color of Eyes: blue
Appearance: caramel-colored coat with short sleek fur and lighter stripes. His eyes are light blue and his markings are: on his muzzle, tail tip, ears, his left front paw and back right paw, and random elsewhere. (Possible picture soon)
Physical/Performance-wise Strengths: he's fast and small
Physical/Performance-wise Weakness: because of his small size, he is sometimes an easy target and not that strong
Mental Traits
Interests: hunting and showing off
Dislikes: Iceshard, Dark Forest cats, his father
Fears: his father, death, insanity
Mental Strengths: he is 100% sane and he feels the sprit of his mother around him sometimes, lifting his spirits and encouraging him.
Mental Weaknesses: Because of his past, he is often haunted by nightmares, usually of his father coming back or his mother's death. Sometime's they are so vivid and severe, that he is only half-listening to what's happening most of the time. When it comes to battle, a new fear gets his attention.
Social Status
Tribe/Clan: SkyClan
Rank: Warrior
Family:
Brothers - Hailfall (Alive), Applekit (Hunts in StarClan)
Sister - Speedpaw (Hunts in StarClan)
Mother - Sweetlily (Hunts in StarClan)
Father - Sharpthorn (Wanders in The Dark Forest)
Mate: not yet
Kits: not yet
Extra: His named is spelled "Carmel" instead of "Caramel" because it is pronounced "Carmel."
He swears Iceshard's parcially insane.
RP Sample:
I panicked. Who to choose? My leader? Or my sister. My sister. I ran over to her, thinking I could make it on time, when another apprentice darted into my path. Jaypaw. Icepaw's brother from ShadowClan. I push him out of the way and dart passed him, only to be dragged back down again. He digs his claws into my back and I can only watch as Icepaw pounces on Sweetpaw and starts pummeling her belly. Then Sweetpaw wiggles out and jumps on top of Icepaw and is about land a hard blow when I suddenly feel the weight on me lighten and Jaypaw runs to rescue his sister. They all start fighting and thrashing out at each other. It's not a fair fight. As I get up to help Sweetpaw, Icepaw and Jaypaw step back staring in horror, as Sweetpaw's eyes rolled into the back of her head, and she collapsed on the ground, bleeding from a wound in her throat. I rush over to her and Icepaw and Jaypaw dont attack. "C-Carmelpaw..." Sweetpaw rasped. "St-stay strong... For m-me.... For y-y-you... You m-must bec-come a w-w-war..." her voice trailed off.
"No no no no." I meowed. "Stay with me!"
"Become a w-warrior.... For the... For the both of u-us... I l-love y-you..." her eyes glazed over and she stopped moving.
"No. No. No no no!" I wailed. "Sweetpaw! Dont-dont leave me! Sweetpaw!!"
"I-I'm s-sorry. I-I-I didn't mean to k-kill her." Icepaw wimpered.
"Well you did!" I screeched. "And I will never, EVER forgive you." then I ran off.
Last edited by Carmelblaze on Thu Jan 21, 2016 6:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
