Nightshard's Bio

Name:Nightshard
Alias:Nighty,Night
Age:15 moons
Gender:She-cat
Personality:Likes helping cats,not very laid back,patrols usually,helpful,nice,and at some times,funny.
History:Nobody knows who Nightshard's mother was.Some say she just appeared out of nowhere.Had three littermates who are unknown.

Breed:Bombay
Eyes:Golden Brown
Appearance:Mostly black and has white paw tips,white tail tip,and a white nose tip.She is a sleek cat and has a long tail.A Small cat
Strengths:hard to hit because of small size and not that strong.
Weaknesses:not that strong due to small size

Clan:Riverclan
Rank:Warrior
Family:Unknown
Mate:None
Kits:None

RP sample:Nightshard saw a rustle in the leaves.She quickly switched into a hunting crouch.

Nightshard, I hope this is a work in progress. If not, then I would like to ask you to use the coding from the template.
Please copy this code and fill in the necessary requirements. It is mandatory for members to use this template and its coding as it helps with the neatness for creating one's bio.
If you have questions as to what to fill in specific areas, feel free to contact me.

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[b]History:[/b]

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[b]Weight[/b]
[b]Color of Eyes: [/b]
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Thank you.

Here are some suggestions for how to improve it:
Increase the length of the RP sample
Come up with a history for her, even if no one else's characters know her history
Use spaces
Use the BBCode for it
Complete it.